Brian Carson Resume review

[Bman]

I would like to here some comments on my resume.  Pro and cons please.
                      Thanks Bman

[fishforfree]

Allright Bman here goes.

Switch places with me.  I'm you and you're me (forget the current relationship we have for a minute).  Would you sponsor you based on the information provided?  How does the information provided benefit me as a sponsor?  What would PROVOKE me to call you?

Here again pretend you are the potential sponsor when you answer.

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[fishforfree]

As far as appearance of your resume it is very E-A-S-Y to read and very organized.

You get an A+ for that

[Bman]

 I am going to add some more on how I will represent a company. 
       Thanks fff

[Bman]

Ok,I added some. Hope that it will be a little more interresting.
                                         Bman